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author what happened to Adam n eve the varsani?
4th to the last paragraph and the very last paragraph xiaomi and you said qiqi
when is Sarah and Emily going to know about being with each others parent?
author you switched names around for whi Mc was with
more chapters please author
walked to the four? door you mean?
spelling errors...finder?sportless?recurring? don't you mean fine, spotless and rescuing?
"ego and lysandra" duplicate paragraph
test? do you mean taste?
the maze cene from Harry Potter and the goblet of fire kinda sorta
would like it better if you didn't try and sensor certain words
excellent storyline wish it was longer but overall a really great story.
only a coward would leave his women behind
50cal mini gun hello ya
can do basic repairs
it's it's tissue up between a humvee and a duece in a half
you tend to mix the genders up author. might wat to fix that
author I do believe you made a slight miscalculation. 410 10 doesn't equal 412