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ChaosZefnir

ChaosZefnir

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2022-03-03 JoinedUnited States
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  • ChaosZefnir
    ChaosZefnir5mth
    Posted

    Very nice, keep writing. Best of luck!🙌🏽

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    Cinderella and the Three Knights
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  • ChaosZefnir
    ChaosZefnir5mth
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    Dbz was my first manga and anime so I’m very glad to hear that! You’ve motivated me so much you don’t even know!

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  • ChaosZefnir
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    Posted

    Understandable plot, very good descriptions and character names, it also has realistic dialogue so far, good grammar and sentence structure. Good job author! I will be waiting for more updates…

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    Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort
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  • ChaosZefnir
    ChaosZefnir5mth
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    Great writing style and the story so far, has been cohesive with an intriguing plot that I’ve really never seen done before… at least not this good. Props to the author for thinking outside the box for his creation, I hope you don’t plan on straying away from your original vision anytime soon, because I’ll be reading this from now on.

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    THE FOOL
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  • ChaosZefnir
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    How convenient😭. Now you got me thinking I need to befriend a crow.

    "Yeah! That crow! It's the same one that blocked the CCTV cameras when we were investigating Joseph Trilan's death!" They all felt a sense of dread and unease as their suspicion proved correct—that the crow was indeed connected to both incidents.
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    THE FOOL
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    "Cowards! You're letting your wild imaginations get the best of you! I'm sure someone orchestrated these events, and it's not a supernatural being!" The Head Officer remained determined to apprehend whoever was behind these occurrences.
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    THE FOOL
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    As the assailant vanished into the shadows, leaving me wounded and robbed, a cold darkness enveloped my senses. The world around me blurred, and a chill permeated my being as I felt the life draining away. "Maybe this is how the world really is," echoed in my mind as I braced for what seemed like my final moments.
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    THE FOOL
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  • ChaosZefnir
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    And here's the kicker: sometimes, it feels like the law isn't the same for everyone. Ever notice that rich folks seem to get away with things more often? Even if they're caught doing something really wrong, they can still dodge the consequences. How? Simple – they've got money.
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    THE FOOL
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  • ChaosZefnir
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    Commented

    Man, all the time.

    Have you thought about why laws exist if they're not enforced properly? Just turn on the news, and you'll see a bunch of bad stuff—rape, murder, corruption. It's like the world is full of all kinds of terrible things.
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    THE FOOL
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  • ChaosZefnir
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    -Princess Nova Reference

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    -Searix Reference

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    -Prince Night reference

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    -Princess Nova Reference

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    -Leviathan reference

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  • ChaosZefnir
    ChaosZefnir6mth
    Commented

    -Seaia Reference

    Ashafade, the fire kitsune, bowed again, accepting her name. Seaia, the water kitsune, followed suit, and lastly, Eurakon accepted his name as his pupils flashed his earth dragon mark briefly.
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    -Ashafade Reference

    Ashafade, the fire kitsune, bowed again, accepting her name. Seaia, the water kitsune, followed suit, and lastly, Eurakon accepted his name as his pupils flashed his earth dragon mark briefly.
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    -Eurakon Reference

    Ashafade, the fire kitsune, bowed again, accepting her name. Seaia, the water kitsune, followed suit, and lastly, Eurakon accepted his name as his pupils flashed his earth dragon mark briefly.
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