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Lone_Star_5879

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2022-03-06 JoinedGlobal
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    Lone_Star_58791yr
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    Thank you for the unexpected save! She's a perfect character to retake the stage, and helps build another aspect of the relationship with the protagonist for once the young man matures and thinks about killing him because of the sword.

    Ch 812 Where Is Your Young Master Xu? I Have Something to Talk to Him
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    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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    Lone_Star_58792yr
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    Great chapter! Thank you for bringing us Baby Alice! <3

    Ch 714 Historia Paralela La Caída Capitulo 27: Rompecorazones.
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    The Guardian [Spanish/Español]
    Fantasy · Evil_Warlord
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    Lone_Star_58792yr
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    Loving the story. Rather addicting, actually. You have done a great job on intermixing enough slice of life, screen time, and non-main character interaction to bring the secondaries a real depth in motivations, character, and growth. Using them to advance the main charcter's development in a very realistic way. Thank you for the great work. My only two problems with the story are that 1) Google translate often mistakes the gender and I have to mentally correct it from context (breaking the immersion) , and 2) I've caught up to where you are writing and am now following along with the chapters as they drop hahaha Thank you again! Wonderful story, great pacing / unfolding.

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    The Guardian [Spanish/Español]
    Fantasy · Evil_Warlord
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