

Hi, I’m just starting up writing novels, so please read my stuff, and give me feedback!
Writing
of reading
368
Read books
Why is that suspicious?? He knows she did OF?? Or am i missing something
For real this novel really surprised me, it really stands out in its genre, just hope it doesnt go the out of world fantasy trope like other rebate novels usually does… I dont want to see mc traveling to other planets and starting a power leveling novel lmao. Just want him to be rich af with his girls🤣
This is the first thing I read from this author, and holy was i prepared for the normal rebate slop…. And thank god was I wrong, easily the best rebate urban novel I have read. All the characters feel alive, we get to actually know the characters, and what they think and feel. The only thing I would like to see is mc starting to abuse his rebate to get rich, but hopefully thats coming soon! Now it’s time to stack chapters and check out authors other novels since this was gas!
It’s in third person, we aren’t viewing it from mc’s POV, he doesn’t know the teacher beushed it off
Uhmmm what??? He just said goodbye to everyone except cassidy??? Shouldn’t that mean that it can only be cass, since the other three would have had to have been the flash to change clothes and everything at the time it took him to walk out and down the stairs
Bruh u cant say that shit with Jesus Christ in ur name😂
Literally read the next paragraph…..🙄
I knew it… they are either werewolves or vampire hunters
A very well written novel, nothing really to complain about… except for one thing - LOW STAT ADVANCEMENTS!!!! It triggers me so much lmao, and it is such an easy fix to do. Like when you go through the eanks that stat gains from breakthroughs should exponentially grow with the difficulty of the rank. But at the start he goes from Faintstar radiant —> kindlestar radiant here all his stats go from around ≈ 60 —> 100-110. This stat advancement is totally fine and nice to see, one full rank doubled his stats and gave him 50 points in each stat. Then I see that Asher reaches the Blazestar Radiant rank but here all his stats is only around 300 some higher and some lower. This is TWO whole ranks higher, but his stats only rise by around 200 in each stat. Which makes one whole rank advancement only rise by around 100 stats… This makes the advancements seem so lackluster and underwhelming imo. The stats should exponentially grow with the difficulty of the rank. Not to mention his physique which also gives him stat points through training and battles, but idk either it gives like 1 stat a year or is just lowkey forgotten lol. So yeah his stat gains should have been higher imo, for me it would have been great if his stat gains for each full rank advancement would be like this: faintstar radiant —> kindlestar radiant = 50 net gain, which it is. Kindlestar radiant —> brightstar radiant = 100 net gain, rn it is lower. Brightstar radiant —> blazestar radiant = 200 net gain, right now it is only around 100… also this should be without stat gained from his physique also. If it would have happened like this his stats should have looked at around 500 in each at least at blazestar radiant instead of the around 300 it is now… This is enough of a rant for now, I severely hope the author buffs his stat gains from rank advancement and physique gains because this shit is severely underwhelming. It doesnt really change anything for the story either, it is only visually changing for the reader. Already saw comments in the chapters about readers commenting about the lackluster stat gains. Also, can you show his interface more often? It is pretty rare they are shown, I like seeing them lol Otherwise great novel author, you are doing great, cant wait to read more🫡