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This story moves at a painfully slow pace. After 30 chapters, the main character is still a child, and the narrative feels stuck in place. The lack of meaningful progression makes it hard to stay invested. Simple time skips or faster transitions could have helped a lot, but instead the story lingers on moments that don’t add much value. Reading long stretches focused on very young characters just isn’t engaging. At that stage, they have little agency and depend almost entirely on adults, which removes tension and impact from the plot. Because of that, I’m stopping here. The premise had potential, but the execution makes it more tedious than enjoyable.

I enjoy this novel keep up the good work author +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I totally agree with you on this one @jackleell

___________________________________________________________________ one of masterpiece story, i like world building and the plot especially, keep up author

It's quite funny how this has 4.6 stars because I'm 100% sure this AI generated chapters. The chapters are short, and here the author wants us to pay for Patreon to read this kind of small chapters. Is this author stupid or something?

"The writing quality is amazing, one of the best I've seen on this website. However, the stability of updates is disappointing, with only 60 chapters released in almost a year. The story development is lackluster and fails to engage the reader, making it a challenge to maintain interest. The main character is portrayed as exceedingly naive and uninteresting, especially in his interactions with the maester. Given that he watched Game of Thrones and was imprisoned for 10 years in his previous life, his naivety is surprisingly pronounced. Additionally, the world-building is severely lacking. The story does not explore beyond the locations presented in the original Game of Thrones books or show, which is a missed opportunity for depth and originality. I'm perplexed by the high reviews this story has received; it must be attributed solely to the writing quality.

Nope i just started reading this not so long ago

It's a futile endeavor. The tale involves a man reborn into the Game of Thrones universe, expected to possess ethical standards, yet he proves to be more despicable than the series' nobility. His presence fails to alter the course of events, rendering the plot nonsensical. My interest wanes as I struggle to appreciate such narratives

honestly this is one of the most dissapointing fan fiction _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Straight Garbage. Mc doesn’t even get one of his wishes which just makes this worse 🤮💩-----------------------------------------------------------