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Really cool story with interesting, just some character things i dont like. Romance is great with some characters but really forced and weird with others Man this story would have been imo much nice if he had atleast half the woman. Myra is such a perfect soulmate for him and Elia’d existence was unnecessary. I would have like it more if Elia just remembered her past lives instead of being a separate entity. At least Elia got some relevance compared to half of the harem thats just their to be collected like pokemon. Wouldn’t surprise me if that is what people like. But imo it would have been better if author focused more on romance between the important characters Also every woman gets super horny for mc and it feels like that almost every man in this story is made to be dumb to make the mc look more attractive. He has no make character support and the ones you can consider are fucking useless. Mc is like a lonely man in world full of horny powerful woman and all the other man are either useless or retarded. Don’t get me wrong i really liked this novel. It is for that reason that I had so many things to say.
Honestly author I respect you finished it and giving me some closure. We might disagree in things but I still like reading it. Also you writing is comfortable to read. Most novels on this website, will milk you and drop the story… Which is why after yours and bloodwarlock ill stop buying coins on this platform. Done paying for overpriced books that dont get finished.
Author is professional filler writer, would have preferred less chapters with better content. But that makes money… Instead we get half a chapters worth introduction of some random side character