I being read this book for quite while now and I'm honor you put my character into your story! Now for the story, is not great but I think you can improve but it's already good! a lot of plots twist... like a lot... and there also puzzle that I have to figure it out... so I have to read more... I just kinda like if you give us 30 or 40 chapter for free that will great... but hey I already paid chapter 16 until now and I don't regret it because that answer my question that happen in the story.... I hope you well and good luck with this novel my friend and ignore the haters that will come to you later!