I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving. The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye. The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about. Keep up the good work.

I really like, how well this chapter is written. The writing style improved a lot!