It's a good book so far it could use a niece to nephew change on Day 15,820. Or just change Charles to a female in the whole book.

He/She issue with the main character, it's not bad in this chapter and case but I don't know about the rest of the book.

What is the gender of the leading person in the story female or male? She has been assigned to me by the sect leader, settle her in for me?

Web Novel or authors don't know but gender swapping is a real issue.In this chapter it swapped ot junior niece to junior nephew. In previous chapters it swapped Am Man from him to her for a hole chapter!!????????

Need to fix the he/ she issue in the chapter. Did the author forget the gender of the main character is? If it was a couple of times it could be missed but not all the time.

The last half of the chapter is a repeat of the first half. Other than the last 2 paragraphs, with the last one repeating the one before it. I really like the book, keep up the fabulous work. I hope the author can edit the 2 chapters that have been repeated for future readers.

Need to edit the chapter about 12 paragraphs at the end are just a repeat word for word of the previous 12. I'm liking this book so keep up the great work.

I stuck around for a few more chapters. Got the gender swap going on again, the name has been the same since it was changed. Need to address the name change, leave a message saying that it's changing, in the chapter before it comes or at the end of the chapter. If it was deliberately changed or accidental change doesn't really matter but a comment about it helps.

I have the same comment about what is up with the gender change. Is it a translation issue, and or Web Novel issue? I could be the author but I doubt it all or nearly all books I have read. If it isn't addressed at this point it will ruin the book, after this chapter I don't know if I will keep reading it. Name and gender swaps are the worst because you don't know who it's referring to.

Gender doesn't matter if it's referred to with a neutral reference. However, it has been referred to as a male other than a couple of times and most of those times is referred to as a male with a female voice. I don't know if it was referred to as a her, if it was it was only one time.

Him as a female and as male should be!It as a female and male.Since it is nearly always referred to as a male other saying it has a female voice about 3 times the implication is that it is a male with a female voice. Otherwise the author should use a gender neutral reference for the system and the administrator.

Great job keep it up

Keep the chapters coming, really like this book

It's always good to have more information about your enemies what better way to get it than having ones that they have getting information for them

Can't wait for the battle to be over and looting to be done

More women to Yohan how is he going to conquer them? It's nice of the Queen to send more powerful women for him to cultivate with to get stronger before meating her, so she can fall easier before Yohan.

Chapter is short but I am really liking the book.

I like the book didn't notice any misshapes in the chapter

Great book waiting for more chapters.

Great book waiting for more chapters.