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Deathilim_60927dReplied to starless_xHello, I'm rather a new writer so I make some mistakes. But you don't have to worry about this particular one, the girl isn't a romantic interest. She serves a purpose way later in the plot.
"Can you bring along my granddaughter instead?"- Deathilim_6091mthReplied to Aaryan_RaiCh 115 A Game of Hide and Seek (3)
- Deathilim_6091mthReplied to Old_FoolCh 42 Expectations to the future.
- Deathilim_6093mthReplied to AViCh 113 A Game of Hide and Seek (1)
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- Deathilim_6094mthReplied to EyJCh 111 Three Major Aspects (2)
- Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Noiir
Some concepts, notably the “extra is a mafia” concept was inspired by it. I think the only thing similar is the Corleone name, which is a real life thing and from the Godfather. Also the Club system which I really liked and changed a few things about it. Is there a problem?
Ch 116 Combat Class (1) - Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Mickaelle09
Indomitable Spirit is not a skill. It's a natural born talent.
[Talent: Indomitable Spirit — The embers of an unyielding spirit empowers the body in any situation, limitlessly.] - Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Mickaelle09
Why was Elias not to be messed with? not because of his strength. But because of his people. Remove his subordinates from the equation, he's but a weak, little teenager.
"The information given was wrong… they didn't say you knew how to fight, you goddamn bastard." - Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Mickaelle09
Under what rules do you think the former Elias couldn't get this talent?
[Talent: Indomitable Spirit — The embers of an unyielding spirit empowers the body in any situation, limitlessly.] - Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Mickaelle09
Local crooks or criminals don't know much stuff about the mafia world. They only know the Castellano name. Elias is relatively unpopular because he was rarely involved in any of the Castellano business since he was a child.
"The information given was wrong… they didn't say you knew how to fight, you goddamn bastard." - Deathilim_6095mthReplied to Adenusi_EniolaCh 111 Three Major Aspects (2)
- Deathilim_6095mthReplied to SpookyneahCh 112 Three Major Aspects (3)
- Deathilim_6095mthReplied to DaoistlSLfgKCh 114 A Game of Hide and Seek (2)