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Albert_pause2yrCommentedHoly. Numbers?
600,000 experience points!- Albert_pause2yrCommentedCh 19 Registering Selena.
- Albert_pause2yrPosted
There isn't a lot do discuss at the point of me writing this review, 7 Chapters. I won't talk about grammar, it happens to the best of us. For character design I could sense they might have twists later on as the MC seems to have beef with some people that he might take a dark turn. For update stability, the author said one chapter a day, and in one of his after thought he mentioned college, so I guess that's the reason. World background we haven't seen a lot of it yet as we are still in the starter town, I won't go in detail as something interesting was mentioned in Chapter 1. Story development is another thing that I think the author is slowly cooking. Overall a great read, still can't be sure until we have more content. I recommend giving this a try.
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedCh 5 Rat's Slayer, Leveling UP!
- Albert_pause2yrCommented'I still have about three months until that dungeon breaks' Cain thought as he walked away toward the quest wall.
- Albert_pause2yrCommented
Don't call this one
"You don't seem well, you could take a rest in the guest room, I will call a healer for you!" She suggested, worried for his well-being as if he was her son. - Albert_pause2yrCommented'Did I die!' Cain looked around him in shock, 'Did I get reincarnated?' He wondered as he glared at his own hands.
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedCh 4 The scam quest and the angry blacksmith!
- Albert_pause2yrCommented"When you slap someone, you should expect to be slapped back! They came to steal from us and brought it on themselves!" This was the philosophy Simon knew works! He had noticed that if he just fought back, the bullying would increase. The bullies didn't lose anything and could just try again and again. It was then that he realized, he need to make going after him dangerous. This way they won't even try!
- Albert_pause2yrCommented"I can count! 10+10+10+10+5=45! Those three idiots were after our credit, So I have gone after theirs!" Simon revealed that he had stolen the three bullies' credit.
- Albert_pause2yrPosted
The story so far is still good, at the start I expected a lone wolf story with Simon chasing whoever did that to his village but instead we are now in a military school? I don't hate the twist but I hoped for a more power fantasy. There are also a lot of grammar problems, it didn't put me off though as I got a laugh of it. Sorry author.
- Albert_pause2yrCommented"Talk slowly, Aew! Your spit got on my face!" Simon pretended to wipe his face with his sleeve.
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedAnother one! he sent a right jab this time, following the combo with another left jab. Suddenly, Dina's massive body disappeared from his field of view. No, she didn't disappear, she ducked to dodge the punches.
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedFacing Dina, Simon gulped... Looking at her again... she still didn't seem like the type of person he should mess with. Her arms are thicker than his thighs.
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedSlowly she walked to the ring, "Simon came here!" She called him to a match!
- Albert_pause2yrCommentedDina thought that this is what she felt before, he was definitely a wild beast that won't fall down easily. She started to get a tingling feeling, I want to throw punches with him.