Tronic42

That he apparently gets exhausted to the point of nearly collapsing does not make any sense whatsoever. Not to mention that he was pretty uneffective in his own fight as well...

I understand that and like that you are creating characters that are not perfect. It is after all supposed to reflect "real life". What threw me off was that I don't get which flaw Daiki is trying to "correct"... As far as I remember from the chapters, the boy is pretty much training 90% of the day. So accusing him of slacking does not make sense. Arrogance/underestimating an opponent did not really happen as far as I remember because he only sparks with the academy students and the elders who kick his ass (in an educational manner) anyway Meh, maybe I don't see something obvious or don't remember it. Does not matter much anyway. Chapter quality is great as always and I did not encounter a scene where the logic is fubar so far. Sooo everything good 👍

Tftc! Funny how you made Hiruzen talk about Naruto being truly Minato/Kushina's son 😂

thanks for the update! Nevertheless I find the beating of Satoshi illogical. as far as the written chapters indicate Satoshi never relaxed his training and never really gloated or underestimated an opponent. Maybe, and I mean maybe considering that the children are training to be killers for a few years already, the lifelike illusion was a bit much. But Daiki does not question what prompted him to do what he did and is mad that he did not do it more discretely. Which considering that if Satoshi would not have transfered to that specific class would not have been known. And even now, he did not actively alter the Uchiha kids Psyche. the kid is plain afraid of Satoshi. and after all that, the lesson he gives Satoshi is by literally beating him near death, which is now somehow proof that Satoshi is slacking?! You could put Hashirama at five there and he would lose against a (Elite) Join nearly every time, especially if the Jonin knows all your tricks...

How ridiculous that you made Kushina able to use KCM. And don't even try to explain it away with Kurama helping her. That would not have worked because of Kuramas "hatred filled chakra". That is the whole premise of Naruto using the Waterfall of truth etc. in canon Kushina was unable to use Kuramas chakra at all. She literally packed him away as tightly as possible.

really got annoying since he went to Hogwarts... the diary cannot be physically destroyed (without fiendfyre etc.) ergo you cannot just rip a page out and give someone...otherwise you could make one book with a thousand pages a hocrux, than rip every page out and distribute it everywhere on the world and have 1000 horcruxes...

yeah...drop. Bye.

What bullshit is the situation between Bjorn and Alys… If they accept such bullshit why don’t they let people rape the other noble ladys of the north and call it a marriage as well. If that is not resolved, I will drop this ff unfortunately. Was a nice „op“ novel till now too. A shame…

it would be nice if the MC is actually a little bit heroic as well. I get the whole "every action must benefit the MC" mentality you are portraying. But I would like the MC more if he would actually want to help people in his thoughts, even if it is not the only thought like the OG Midoriya, but more like a part of his decision. Maybe like 30% or something :D

really annoying arc. Forced plot. Even if Harry wanted to kill the Basilisk later l, he could have just ambushed the girl and taken the Diary from her.