wow this book is just wow. ive read it on another website i can only say that it is unbearable. i forced myself to read throught the thing but it was just painfull absolutely painfull reason why not to read this [1] at the start the novel it wasnt bad mc had only 2 subordinates no biggie right? after that he now has a f@cking army and the mc has given them basically all his powers they can take skills and shit. i could take that althought its a bit annoying and every battle feels like its a war [2] ever since the mc got a bunc of subordinates when he goes out of battle its like hes fighting his own guys in tug of war to get out there and fight there is a shit ton of drama just for him to battle. [3] the story progression is a bit weird the dragon is chained yeah yeah yeah sealed power and stuff but thise guys are coming after him (the dragon) if i remember correctly why would they need a damn army? and not send some assasion to him or litterally anything to sneakily go to him as to not alert him or be spotted so damn easilly also his KIDS are so damn weak and why? they are dragons too so why is there such a vast difference in power age? if so then the dragond wouldve been wiped out long ago its just plot convenience [4] as i stated before there is quite a bit of plot convience and the charecters just not doing things smartly like why didnt that necromcer go before his subordinates? even if he doesnt know the mcs abillity thats just preparing them for him also why fid he evrn SEND his subordinates to test their capabilities? why THERE his test couldve just been destroyed without showcasing anything it doesnt make sense why he would do it there of all places [5] MOST IMPORTANT POINT its cringy as fuck okay besides my bitching the story isnt bad UNTIL you notice something thats in every single chapter that wont go away and you cannot ignore. the way the charecters speak it is do uterly cringy that even if this story was perfect i would read it seriously how many times does this guy stutter every chapter he goes “y-you r-r-r-really love me🥺”. i honeslty cant take it and itll melt your brain trying to. and the mcs personality is just so weird and he is incredibly childish and again sufferes from i need to stuttereverydayidos and he infects others with this too everyone he comes near he just makes them cringy asf and the fact that this has sex in it is weird cause the other seemingly wants 4 year old uwu kids to read this but their is sex in it some might call it cute but no its just cringy. its honestly sad to see such a story with such good potential be tarnished like this seriously *things to note* i read this on anotehr site because i absolutely hate this apps formatting so results may vary on my review also i read this awhile ago so i might be forgetting something of the sort

thank you for not letting me waste my time

There should be a game about this………wait