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2022-02-26 JoinedUnited States
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    You seem to have a very large vocabulary that you use perfectly throughout this book. So many of the topics you cover hit hard and are often just as hard to write about, however you really blew it out of the water with this book. There were a few moments where I had to reread a line to understand what was being said but overall it was very well written. I think that there could have been a bit more of a deep dive into the past of the characters however that would obviously take many more chapters to achieve. Great book!

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