Shon_Shibi

If I were you and if I was planning to finish this book and invest my time and thought into writing it, I would just start over again and do it properly, before it's too late to turn back where you've written too many chaps and rewriting just seems pointless. And lastly, this is my honest opinion as someone who's spent a lot of time on this app reading countless novels, it is NOT me trying to put you down. Because I know how hard writing is, especially writing well.

Look dude, the whole point of you doing this is to write a good book that speaks to the majority of readers and gains their attention. To keep them on their edge and deeply interested in the story. But this is just not the way to do it. The complete opposite in fact. And the proof of that is the number of comments in your chapters saying they're gonna drop, and then are never seen again.

And the way that your killing of characters that you've spent close to a hundred chaps building up, just so that you can make the MC 'toughen up' and give him 'purpose' is just sad to see. You are just tearing down the story you are trying to build.

The universal truth is that the higher the stages or tiers, the bigger the divide of strength between them. But the way you've nerfed them and blamed it on the MCs low SP is just down-right bad writing.

if they weren't meant to be 'invincible' (or OP like I'd call it), why make them calamity ranks? Literally 2 stages above the strongest hero's 'S-rank'.

This book…has it all. The story, the harem, the fights, the writing, the thrill, and lastly the ending. They were all perfect. I really hope Mr.Author writes the sequel for this soon, if he hasn’t planned to already.

I agree.... ahhh....this uncontrollable rage I feel.. .. . But you have to agree only an exceptional author can make you feel such emotions through mere words.