The last third of this chapter is a repeat of the last chapter. Please fix this, thank you.

obviously this girl is unwilling. what did everyone expect???

As with what alot of the readers have said here, the grammar does deter one from enjoying the novel. It is interesting seeing that most of the works I found here have great grammar. Perhaps author can engage someone to do proofreading and editing of this story to help author better express herself since it is obvious that English is not her first language. Some expressions are unclear that I find myself skipping through them.