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Ghost174mthCommentedFamous last words
Even Crocodile joined in, a smirk on his face. "It's quite the embarrassment to be defeated by a rookie!"- Ghost175mthCommented
it should be at the end of the third war, when Rasa became the 4th Kazakage
(TN: The author said there were no conflicts b/w Land of Wind and Land of Water, he probably doesn't remember Pakura got sacrificed by Suna to ease their conflict with Kiri and I believe that the conflicts were mainly from the 2nd Great War) - Ghost175mthCommented
when I read up to" a potential love interest ", I was thinking its not bad enough no delete but the second part about the heavenly scene got me thanking you for deleting it đđđ
(The original Chinese version tried making Koizumi a potential love interest, but it seemed very pedophilic and weird so I'm cutting that out completely. There was a whole scene where the Chinese version of Chiba kept his observation haki on when bathing together, and said what he saw was heavenly...fucking disgusting) - Ghost176mthCommented
make it so that the queen has all the other abilities except the Knight. and make it that the queen is sentient and can talk as if she is a normal person. She can also alter her appearance so she can mimic other people and can function like an assassin or to gather information.
This book has been deleted. - Ghost1710mthCommented'In the original book, Nightin uses this trick to directly transform from an eighty-year-old old woman into a beautiful young mature woman.'
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the real question is why didn't Guy and Kakashi go all out? they are definitely stronger than they let on
<You remember those Anbu ninjas who just watched 3rd Hokage being killed by Orochimaru outside of the Four Yang Formation? Any theories> - Ghost1710mthCommented
the real question is why didn't Guy and Kakashi go all out? they are definitely stronger than they let on
<You remember those Anbu ninjas who just watched 3rd Hokage being killed by Orochimaru outside of the Four Yang Formation? Any theories> - Ghost1710mthCommented
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2- Second is a one piece novel with mc transmigrating as Zoro, he will still be in luffy's crew and as cheat would be his future memories and strong body. - Ghost1711mthReplied to Soafa
Tobi, the white zetsu that Obito wore as an armour when he tried to save Rin. In Chinese novels they translate his name like this, but I thought this was an original novel not a translation
After uttering those words, Madara's body underwent a transformation, morphing into Afei's form. Black Zetsu promptly affixed himself to this new vessel, and together they employed the Mayfly technique to vanish from the scene. Shortly after their departure, a substantial surge of chakra descended upon the very same location. Emerging into view was a woman in her thirties, adorned in crimson attire. It was none other than Mito. - Ghost1711mthCommented
I'll give you an idea, make it that in the ancient times he would practice shamanism and he would evolve it into the magic we know. and he would keep magic a secret that not many people know about. Like in our current times but magic is only known to a few people. No cheats, but he gains immortality by bathing in the blood of a 1000 people
The mc becomes a young warrior, then a tribe leader, then an elder, and as he becomes older, he notices that he doesn't seem to age! And we'll follow him through the ancient time until modern times. He is going to have some kind of cheat, I might give him supersoldier serum, or make him a werewolf or some other supernatural being, not to the point that he can destroy the earth or anything but strong enough that he can take on a 50-100 men on his own. - Ghost1711mthCommentedCh 53 Urano's 'problem'
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it has Chinese writings, must be from alibaba smh
Hmmm... I have a new model for the MK III Arm! I'll post it right here for you guys who saw this limited time only chapter - Ghost171yrCommentedCh 69 Captured
- Ghost171yrCommentedCh 136 Final Memories of an Old Era
- Ghost171yrCommentedCh 131 LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETS GET READY TO RUUUUUUUUUUMBLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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If you write another story after this one I will vow to give you all my stones daily as long as you continue to write.
All he needs is a single opportunity and its coming very fast. Sigh. - Ghost171yrCommented
I mean, you wouldn't publish it if it isn't 5 stars in your eyes I think. so it's normal for people to think that the novel they wrote is flawless
Sorry to blue ball you guys! But something came up... I'll be back tomorrow! Damn! Anyway, I left a review everyone go like it so new people can see... No its not 5 stars who the fuck is such a loser to leave a 5 star review on their own novel? Its unbelievable the type of people you find on this god forsaken site.