Sackofpotatoes

This has a lot of potential!

Make the nanites change the parasite dna a bit

It sucks ass

This is worse then what was previously written

What happened men donn't drop it or at least give it to me so I can do it

The conce is Great, the concept is also awesome, some ideas that I can give is to make the Mc badass when it comes to dealing with people that come to the arcade. On the topic of games the idea of the mc have the power of <No Game No Life> would be great as well it would the arcade that even though it is his, it would make it his domain. Those who cause conflict within the arcade can play a game with the mc with the ability <No Game No life> and take their abilities and grant upon them their fate. Maybe you should have like the system upgrade so from and depending on the universe of characters that come to the arcade he could pick one bloodline, ability, and however the system would give him an option if he wants more abilities or powers from that universe he would have to challenge the person in question. B I really do think it awesome, lol look how much I was inspired to write this.😅😇 On another note p don’t let the mc be talked on like he’s someone’s punk. …. On another note please don’t drop this it has a bright future I see but if that possibility comes to pass please let me know as I would not want to see such a great idea go to waste