RRMenon

Don't worry, I'm only taking a break to sort out some personal stuff at home. I will definitely continue this series. Thank you for being patient with me. I promise to deliver good content in the next few weeks.

Lol they are not family. They are friends and neighbours.

Well I intended for the character to be self-absorbed and insufferable. I wanted to show that she was extremely materialistic and cares more about her phone than her life. You say that nobody would act like this but you'd actually be surprised how many people would do this in real life.

Hail evil Canada!

Hey, sure we can connect on Discord: menoninblack#5738

Haha I don't know if that's a good or bad thing lol

Thank you. Corrected.

Yes, they're sending texts. Hence, the abbreviations

I never said my story is perfect either. This is my first written work so I'm well aware that there are issues with it. When I receive criticism that actually helps me improve it, I'm grateful. But you seem to think that the Deathless not being called zombies is somehow a huge issue. That isn't criticism. That's just your personal preference. So don't call me delusion just case I don't conform to your standards. Again, if you don't like it, don't read it.

Whatever you choose to call them, the events of the story would go on the exact same way. That's the way I've designed the story. Whether the characters calls them zombies or not, doesn't matter one bit. Let's say Ray calls them zombies from the very start. Would literally any of the events of the story be effected? Yes, maybe the dialogues will. But none of the plot points. Again, your argument does not make sense to me.