I've read your first chapter which was very fluent written and easy to understand. The Plot itself is very orignial and I like the characters already. I will read more of your story soon, so keep on writing! :)

I've read the first chapter so far. It is really well written. I've added it to my library aswell. Will check out more chapters soon and let you know my opinion. :)

Thank you! I will provide more Chapters in the future. :)