LuisRaoul
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LuisRaoul9mthCommentedWow! A different but similar start I say so myself!
Soot mixed with blood in his lungs producing a brackish black ooze exiting onto the ground. A dry heave followed by a series of coughs reverberated into the dark night. Eyes blurred; the world looks like it's crying. A vignette of ink took over his vision as the world faded to black. It began on a nice night. A game night, maybe it went too long, nothing he would complain about now. The world doesn't allow for too many good nights, some people have used up all the luck for others. The Moon high in the sky, full and tinted a deep sanguine, leaving trails across the grass like well soaked knives. Spilling out onto our scene. Such a shame, a shame.- LuisRaoul9mthPosted
I really enjoyed the creation of this and although it wasn’t the best and most amazing story ever written it had for itself and authenticity and creativity in its use of ancient symbolism and philosophy in thought that I found it provoking. Provoking In a way very unexpected from from a book that is in the science fiction fantasy category, I want more serious stories like this in the world! Where can I find them??!