Benjamin_osmar

It's creative and fun, blending the DC universe with humor, slice-of-life, and an adult twist. The protagonist, a Gotham bar owner, brings up unusual situations with heroes and villains. It's well-written, but the slow pace and mature content may not appeal to everyone

A very good story. The character is interesting despite his lack of charisma, and the storytelling is well-structured. However, it suffers from the same problem as many novels: it's tiring to read. When I read it, there's so much technical stuff, thought, and perspective that's often useless or could be summarized that it becomes a bit tiresome. I understand that it's meant to build the character and for the reader to learn more about the world and the protagonist's perspective on things, but there's so much of it that it's tiring to read. There are parts or conversations that could easily be wrapped up quickly and wouldn't change anything, but then there's a giant monologue that turns a quick conversation into almost an entire chapter. That said, the story is a 10/10, but because of how it's written, it's a 2/10.

Good story, but after a while, it starts to get tiring due to the amount of fluff. There are times when the conversation lasts much longer than it should because of thoughts, points of view, and so on. It's fun, but after a while, it gets tiring. I lost the desire to read because of this, because I know the next chapter will be equally exhausting.

At first I was confused but after chapter 3 it got really good, I also liked your perspective on what an upside down world would be like, keep writing, it's good