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Jason_Linton

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    I feel like the last half of the last sentence could be reworded

    He was cut off by the motion of hot water travelling through the air, coming in contact with the back of his head, drenching him from the head down, the water dripping off his shoulders in an instant. He turned slowly, seemingly unphased by the water, only to see Maki holding a pot in a position that implies she was the one who threw the water at him.
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    FALLEN MOON
    Eastern · Soniimax
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