UnDyingFear
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SandKastle, SandKastle You beautiful man. You never miss. Our MC, Kaiden, is a basketball know-it-all, however, this knowledge of his can't be put to use. Why? Well, you're gonna have to read and find out. The writing quality so far: SSS+ I don't see any issues with grammar, and Sandy's choice of words is always varied. Story Development: SSS+ I don't feel this novel is moving too fast or too slow, the goal of the MC is apparent to us because of the time spent, building up his character and introducing him to us. On top of that, Sandy hasn't decided to use the Forbidden Technique: Cliffhanger, but he might start using it later. My expectations are naturally high after reading FTTI, so let's hope this isn't an airball. Good Luck Sandy.
What's june doing here?!
I don't really read novels where action isn't the core, and simply because they become boring for me quite quickly. But this novel was different. This novel was one of the few novels that I couldn't take a break in between chapters, I had to carry on reading... I was hooked. The intensity of the survival show, the danger that comes with failure, the suspense and the mystery all blend together to create perfection. The amount of times I was biting my nails due to the suspense was countless, the amount of times it felt like my heart was going to explode from the intensity again... countless. Unfortunately, I caught up. So now I wait for the chapters to stack up so I can get another big dose of adrenaline and excitement. I think this is the first time I've given a novel a perfect five stars. Keep up the good work SandKastle. P.S. I think you should create a discord server and a character list. The discord server would allow the readers to interact with one another as well as you. The character list is more for stackers like me who forget certain characters over time (it doesn't have to be incredibly detailed, it should have just enough so that we can work out who someone is.)
i would drop this but due to a reliable source i have been led to believe that around chapter 100, the mc breaks free. Let's hope it's true
me at 5ft 10