Okay, so even though I had just started reading, the story and the world that this is in, hooked me. Yeah, it's the stereotypical "Oh, this guy killed my parents, so I'm gonna enact revenge" but so far it doesn't seem to ride on that notion too much. The characters so far have been written well, where you can have an understanding of who the person is and how they'd carry themselves just by dialogue, and I love that. We haven't gotten much about the world so far, and I hope that gets better, or we learn more as it goes along, but besides that... Pretty solid story, can't wait for it to get bigger and more in-depth. Good work so far, but like, if you could update a bit more often so it doesn't feel like we're waiting an eternity, that would be nice.

Why do I feel like this man bout to get someone in trouble?