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Carlos_Eduardo_97581mthCommentedtrash can always gets abused... how pitiful
Inside the classroom, Yang Xiaotian kept moving, sweeping his leg around so forcefully that the trash can in the corner scattered wildly.- Carlos_Eduardo_97581mthReplied to raverman
fair enough
As I retrieved the knives, I whispered aloud, If they wanted to live, they had to have the will to live, and they clearly lacked willpower. - Carlos_Eduardo_97581mthReplied to NAVATEJ_MANRAS
I bag your perdon, me donuts underrstando wht ya meanz? (webnovel doesn't allow edits man)
However, just as his feet were about to touch the platform… - Carlos_Eduardo_97584mthCommentedHe could freely master the power of the extraordinary without selling his soul and body.
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if you can punch it in the head, then you also could have just slashed its head open
The remaining goblin appeared confused, following the scent of blood. Upon discovering its fallen comrade in a pool of crimson, it attempted to emit a shriek, but Dante swiftly punched it in the head. - Carlos_Eduardo_97584mthCommented
I just wonder how the wolves didnt take him down if 'they' managed to bite him? shouldnt they weigh him down? I think the author could change bites to scratches/claw attacks to make a lil more sense.
Dante snatched up the bag and clenched it between his teeth, never slowing his pace. While running, his still-intact right hand rifled through the bag's contents. Ghast Wolves continued to leap from behind, and he deftly dodged them, though most managed to sink their teeth into him. His body bore numerous bite wounds, some leaving gaping holes from which blood constantly streamed. Ignoring the searing pain, Dante persevered, his teeth gripping the bag's material until he finally located what he sought—a packet of cooked meat. It was their food, or rather, the squad's food, not Dante's. - Carlos_Eduardo_97584mthCommented
cant people bring out more creative begginings?
However, just as his feet were about to touch the platform… - Carlos_Eduardo_97585mthCommented
there was absolutely no need to give them knives. This is just ignorance, and can be seen as him giving incentive for them to comit suicide, right after they went through plenty of agony.
As I retrieved the knives, I whispered aloud, If they wanted to live, they had to have the will to live, and they clearly lacked willpower. - Carlos_Eduardo_97585mthCommented
soap can be kinda cheap tho?
"What the hell You're the one who doesn't give me money for soap and shampoo, and you're complaining about me stinking? I swear, I could strangle you right now," I retorted, my anger flaring. Fists clenched, I fought the urge to lash out physically. - Carlos_Eduardo_97589mthReplied to Satan03
sorry, I really thought I had already replied. It's because the differences are simply that big. You also never gave any explanation to the changes up to there.
Attributes:- - Carlos_Eduardo_975811mthCommented
I dont know what to say man... I like villain characters for some part, but I kinda question how much I do at times. I cant feel lile the guys bellow for example. I guess they just want the mc to hate and kill everything he sees? Its also silly to try to guess someone actions based on someone else actions... I dunno, I dunno.
Ch 108 Chapter 108 – Real Friends - Carlos_Eduardo_975811mthReplied to
Because they have a lot of differencies, like the protagonist had earth and water before. Its just an idea though.
Attributes:- - Carlos_Eduardo_975811mthCommented
Author, maybe you should go over to the first chapter you showed the status window and edit it
Attributes:- - Carlos_Eduardo_97581yrCommentedCh 175 Blending In
- Carlos_Eduardo_97581yrCommented
Wasnt it 9 points?
"28 units…20 units…the difference is exactly the boost my Origin ability increases my Health stat!" - Carlos_Eduardo_97581yrCommented
Can he tame it?
"But after a certain time, when the Shrike decides there are no good people to turn to Dream Essence, it leaves the host in search of another city to haunt. Depending on how its host treated it, it either kills or spares them." - Carlos_Eduardo_97581yrCommented
thats the whole problem with it. This stupid move of his... Is just an annoying plot device
When Vikhan saw his status screen for the first time, he cringed at the mess he was seeing. He thought it would be fine if he just let Lorn be, but apparently that wasn't the case. Luckily, Gwen fucked up around that time, so Vikhan could use Elan to act as an antagonist of some sorts in Lorn's path. - Carlos_Eduardo_97581yrCommentedCh 90 Fruit of Magic Awakening(2)
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I think he'd be cursed by the god and hunted by his followers because it says 'Wrath of the God of Light.' but who knows, maybe its like you said, I surely hope so.
"It would be my honor to serve the great god. But where in the wilderness should I establish the temple?" Jake asked.