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ExoticSenta5minReplied to DevotionAnd he keeps saying he isnt a lolicon...
"While she may not look like much, I assure you that her appearance is just an appetizing front, made to house her true capabilities". Sam said firmly, a solemn look appeared on his face.- ExoticSenta7minCommented
You know, this isnt a japanese series, instead of loli you could use "little girl" or "child"...
The other councilmen had similar expressions. Half of their attention was on the man while the other, much greater half was on the red colored, less than four foot tall loli whose features looked no older than ten years old. - ExoticSenta5hCommented
Yeah, that city is drowning in crime bc of the bat. How many lives could have been spared if he just killed that jokester?
Unknowingly, Batman in his quest to save a lost city was helping its criminals work smarter, plan better and develop targeted tactics. - ExoticSenta11hReplied to ExoticSenta
Ah, intangibility...
"There is no record of a species similar to humans who have similar abilities to the one in question. The closest match I could get was a race called Tamaranians, but they don't have teleportation abilities, or density shifting like him". - ExoticSenta12hCommented
Density shifting? Did he have that? When?
"There is no record of a species similar to humans who have similar abilities to the one in question. The closest match I could get was a race called Tamaranians, but they don't have teleportation abilities, or density shifting like him". - ExoticSenta13hCommented
Just transport him before he dies...
He didn't know if Kamui could transport a soul to its dimension. - ExoticSenta13hCommented
Why didnt he give himself POD from DxD ? It can destroy even souls
His Disintegration couldn't work on soul forms or matter that wasn't solid and liquid. - ExoticSenta13hCommented
So, a question? He entered the world in a deserted area to avoid notice, but fist thing he does after entering a city is to fight in broad daylight, without a costume? Why?
The face looked young, like that of a male in his early twenties, curly black hair and glowing purple eyes. The camera zoomed in to get a good look at the facial features, and what came to view caused Olsen to fall into a slight daze. - ExoticSenta15hCommented
So, why did he choose DC? There would have been thousands of other, safer, worlds to start in.
He would rather not drop off uninvited within a city, cause massive damage and tick off the big blue Boy Scout. - ExoticSenta5dReplied to Shub_Niggurath
Good point, though, all of this creates a hole in the premise/world building...
The [Power of Destruction] would reach its maximum efficiency with the perfect control granted by the Astaroth Clan's [High IQ] rather than being used as a weapon simply for brute force by both the Bael and the Gremory. - ExoticSenta5dReplied to Shub_Niggurath
The 'Blood' in bloodline disagrees with your statement :) Also if demonic power frequency or whatever is responsible for "bloodline" powers, someone random could, by chance, awaken POD or even the Phenix bloodline. And, also, that way EVERYONE would have some kind of special random 'bloodline'. Genetics are a way better explanation, which would aslo explain mutations in specific bloodlines (Sera for example), and the birth of new ones (Hole - Abaddon i think).
The [Power of Destruction] would reach its maximum efficiency with the perfect control granted by the Astaroth Clan's [High IQ] rather than being used as a weapon simply for brute force by both the Bael and the Gremory. - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Or try to replicate it...
The woman suddenly become serious, " But you shouldn't tell anyone that you got your gift after accidently jumping in the river as people might become wry of you." - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Ah yeah, im also a big fan of curvious woman :)
"Hey, child! Are you okay?" A beautiful, curvious woman asked, but before he could reply a sudden pain attacked his body, causing him to scream out loud. - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Also, Results of the results?
This paragraph has been deleted. - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Quite a lot of people actually. Mc has no backing or money, and it the guy he attacked is competent, he could sue and get the mc locked up, even if there was a witness.
After all, who would have the audacity to challenge someone again who had proven to be so relentless and had nothing to lose? - ExoticSenta13dCommented
That would probably leave his skin pink, not light. Why not come up with something more beliavable? Alergic reaction, sickness or whetever. No he goes with the most stupidest answer possible, like wth?
'Well, if they ask, I'll say I underwent a laser treatment...' Reiji thought. - ExoticSenta13dCommentedIn the living room, Reiji concocted that he had won a prize in a skin whitening treatment lottery, valid only for that day and expiring at ten in the morning. Although it was a hard justification to swallow, this was the most convincing explanation given his pale appearance. After all, the alternative would be to believe that he was ill to the point of losing all color.
- ExoticSenta13dCommented
He should have gotten a mask or something to hide his identity...
"Alright, let's get started with this..." Reiji murmured. - ExoticSenta13dCommented
Did you write this? It differs from your writing style...
One who watches closely, though from afar.] - ExoticSenta13dReplied to Skaviouz
Does that work? Asking for a friend...
"Damn, did his mother sprinkle sugar on him at birth? What kind of dog luck is this?"