Matei_T4

I swear Junsei has a murder hobo bingo list!

Not this, not that, classic AI writing. Just how lazy are some people nowadays? He also just strings together few wards in a sentence, then paragraph break.

Junsei be scaring them scout girls haaard!

Ouch! Pimp Bro be spitting facts!

Overhauled (71 ch)

Pleaaaaaase, let it no be a time skippu, I really want to hear the conversation with Barbara tomorrow, not several chapters later in a flash back!

Not bad at all, I've never come across this type of development before. I've read a meh fanfic were the protagonist was an Overhaul SI, but never with a protagonist that partners with the yakuza boss. Interesting. Although, the plot now feels shallower and whimsical, compared to before. Even Junsei seems dumber and more passive. If before he had some initiative, now he seems like an overpowered naive autistic person. The cookin' is whack.