Jacka23

I like the story; it's the first fanfic I've read about this video game. The multiversal travel theme could be a problem. What's captivating about the story is the world of Tomb Raider with John Wick. If he starts traveling to worlds like Marvel and Naruto, it'll feel like the essence of Tomb Raider is lost. Perhaps it's best to stay in the Tomb Raider world, or have the multiversal travel happen in worlds with similar themes where the protagonist can survive using John Wick's abilities.

Los primeros tres capítulos me generaron ganas de leer mas de esta historia, espero que esta historia se publique hasta el final, me gusto mucho la idea de un protagonista sin don.

In the first chapters you see a development in Sokka, you see a leader who knows what decisions to make, but since the beginning of the canon you do not see the progress he had previously, the only difference is that he is the leader of the tribe, but he wants to follow the same path as in the original, it is also understood that Aang is a child and that is why he did not take into account the danger of the ship, but here Sokka simply forgives Katara as if more, when if you think about it he really could have put his entire tribe in danger. I only hope that in future chapters the development of the story is not exactly like the canon only with a stronger Sokka who is afraid to change things. (Psdta: my comment was made with the translator)

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thanks for the chapter

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lord of the rings

...............I have seen many fanfic with this theme, but never one with TDG, I hope you don't leave this story. ............................

I'm liking the story.

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