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潜伏木叶，兼职火影

Aaaaaaaaaaaaa, why am I seeing this stupid plot move again? So why do you present the MC as a smart man? Logically, the MC should have killed him very quickly in 1 turn (for example, freezing as a previous enemy), but he chose a stupid and typical move (which I see very often) - to hit the enemy so that he flies away, then run and miss. Naturally, the enemy survives so that the MC kills him much later.

Spoilers! Achtung! 1. I know that MC has only completed 5 classes blah blah blah... but over and over and over and over and over and over again, MC is a dumb idiot and it's hard to read. I'm already tired of this type of MC, I'm tired of it (when the idea is good, but the execution is not very good), the movement in which is based on the stupidity of MC. 2. Senseless murders. Although this is part of the fun in the game series, here it is perceived as unpleasant and is related to the first point. I understand that the author is planning (planning, right?) for MC to improve in the future, but it's annoying.... 3. The world is superficial. But the author went even further - in chapter 130 (or somewhere nearby), a magical one appeared (seriously, magic? Don't complicate the work, so as not to confuse and worsen everything even more) the stone is something like amortensia from HP - with which the MC was fascinated, and before that the author wrote a detailed sex scene of some bandit with a woman who used the stone on the MC Why do we need such a detailed scene? I understand that the author wanted to disgust this corrupt woman, but it would have been better if he had written in such detail about MS and Diana. 4. The characters' disclosure is very clumsy.

Alas, but it’s a skip, because it’s one of those systems that uses cruel punishment for not completing tasks. I’m very disappointed.

There was a lot to tell about this story, but I threw it in the trash after 160 chapters. The reason is that the author wants drama for development of MC and he can not write it (and I do not like dramas, in life enough shit, so also the author makes his own, I do not need)). Also MC can be swollen in shit and then fight the consequences (for example, he got drunk after breaking up with his mother not at home, but in a regular bar where he was caught by a girl hunting him. In the end he "broke up" with the first "girl" and signed a contract for a relationship for 1 year with this scum). I never liked drinking and smoking MC. This is the main reason. (I also noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing.) Why even focus on alcohol and smoking? Self-destruction and degradation is not cool. It’s just repulsive and frustrating. Jews are full of the leadership of Hollywood and what else, why mention it again and again? The author has some kind of a quirk? Why is the MC’s open and casual relationship with girls? What does the author want? Do they want to try more women? I don't like this tendention. Also I noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing, as if he thinks we are stupid (he just picks up the number of words, because. not thought what to write, lol). I especially "like" when the author disappears and reports the reason after the fact, i.e. he does not care about readers. He also gives the right to choose in his fanfic subscribers with Patreon. And also advertises his Patreon regularly.

I agree with you. This is short-sighted and stupidly.

My rule: If I see that there is more than one reincarnated character in the story, then the story "full of sh[i]t". Here’s a case. 140 140 140 140 140

Translation by places (especially at the beginning) is not very good, need more editing. At the end, I was tired of reading these protracted and pompous battles when the MC instead of blitzkrieg gives the enemies to gain full power (the battle with Kaguya brought back interest for a while, the rest became so so lala). The author would have better added material about world research, chakra research, system information. There are drawbacks in logic too. For example, MC says during the battle with Kaguya that he has not enough talent to change reality by drawing (Hello!? Why then the system store?). Figures, well here the author could correct. MC sometimes behaves like an insecure schoolboy in relations with people (some kind of soft words, actions, restraint instead of speaking confidently and taking my own), which I do not like. Oh these Chinese jokes with sneezing (over time start to annoy). Talking to your enemies is another waste of time. Partial deficiency is the resurrection of the dead (parents MC, Minato, Kushina, 1st, 2nd, 3rd Hokagé, Madara... idk but there are not Sasuke's parents). MC received parents from this world too fast. It's very strange. The jokes about sex change technique for Naruto and Sasuke have not been implemented. Tsunade, Terumi May and Kaguya so far without promoting relations with MC. The author has a note for 18+ chapters, but the chapter from Koyuki needs to be moved (if possible) to the related chapters. Sorry but I wrote it with help of a wonderful translator.

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Is it an original work or a translation?