Brian_M_2863

Or even know what comes after.

I liked the chapter, but depending on how long the story goes, you might eventually want to write the numbers out in words too. A lot of people stop feeling comfortable counting zeroes once you enter trillions or higher.

The writing quality isn't the worst I've seen. There are times it reads like AI slop, and skips past important details. Sometimes it'll say things like "I told 'x' character 'y' and their reaction was 'z.' So it skips important details that matters. Sensory descriptions beyond chakra is almost nonexistent. Really, the saving grace is not reading the word helpless every other paragraph, and I'm not struggling to understand basic sentences. His update time has been consistent since I started reading, generally posting multiple chapters per day. I wouldn't worry about this being finished. The story development is somewhat unique. It's not a retelling of canon, and characters do develop differently. The biggest problem is that there are so many characters that the author has to abandon some for multiple chapters at a time. Had the chapters been two or three times longer, the subplot and character changes would have been much smoother with great plot progression. As for the character, he's sort of bland. He doesn't fall into the psychopath trope or the "hur durr, Hiruzen bad and evil" belief. The author wrote a character with a thought process of his own that isn't found everywhere. He's not a complete moron either. Unfortunately, that's about where it ends in positive traits. He's a character that believes since he's one of the strongest, he can do whatever he wants, and he does this later. His concept of romance is shallow, though that could also fall under writing quality. There's no particular "awful" trait that is unbearable. In short, he's nice to his friends, decent to his acquaintances, but indifferent to most others. He has the makings of a good character, just not the fleshed out details for it. Tying into writing quality is the world background. It is shallow at best, adding details that never existed in the manga or anime. That's fantastic, except most of them aren't expanding on anything. It's usually creating new things out of nothing. It technically adds to the world background, but I'd rather know things I had questions about to begin with.

I have no problem with it, but I don't like the ones that act as if their sexuality should define their personality.

I wish I didn't know this existed, because now I have to look it up.

As long as it's not butchering the spelling to something nearly unrecognizable, I'm fine with it.

This review isn’t towards the translator, only the original author. The translation itself is fine, but like all Chinese novels, it uses the words ‘helpless’ and ‘simple’ a lot. It feels repetitive and lacks actual meaning. When I read the words ‘helpless expression’, I know that’s it. The author doesn’t explain what that looks like. It might be some common Chinese reference where they know what it looks like, but I’m not Chinese. This sort of ties into culture and world building. There are times the author references Chinese culture as if the world he’s writing wasn’t based on Japanese culture. Moving onto the character himself and story development. The character is a mixed bag. He doesn’t fall into the trap of young master by chapter 176, and he isn’t one of those psychopaths who has a harem with fifty girls he doesn’t actually care about. Unfortunately, he’s still lazy. Rather, there’s a period where it’s just mission after mission, earning points, and no time to train because everyday he wakes up and has to do anything is a day off or only five minutes of training. I’m guessing the author realized he was getting too strong too quickly and decided to write a thousand pieces of filler to slow down. This review was made at chapter 176. It might change later.

Not quite. Run away as the children understand it means running from the problem itself. Kazuma means live to fight them back another day. At least that's how I perceive it.