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Louriem_98762dReplied to gera_giaThank you very much, but it was the only system I found that could be simple for the MC, because I didn't want him to be doing missions all the time, and also, being one of my first stories, I didn't want to complicate it too much, nor copy other types of systems. Thank you very much for reading. :)
- Louriem_98768dReplied to Zeref_642
At the beginning of the plot, the strongest person was Ye Ziyun's father, the lord of the city, but this was still black gold, it was not until later that he was able to advance thanks to Nie Li. Likewise, the only person who has reached the level of legend would be Ye Ziyun's grandfather, but he is not in the city. Thank you for reading. :)
Nie Feng simply smiled because he knew quite a bit about this world, either from reading the novel or from the knowledge passed down by Qiu Bai, although most of it was about other subjects. Nonetheless, Nie Feng agreed with Nie Li's statement. Even though it sounded arrogant, the level of this city was very low, as there was only one Black Gold level guardian protecting it. - Louriem_987615dCommentedCh 29 Disappointment, Finale
- Louriem_987623dReplied to hmmmmkay
Don't worry, I had the same doubt, so I signed up in his patreon and asked him, there he explained it to me correctly. In addition, I also talked to him about if he was simply going to rewrite the original story with a different point of view, to which he answered that there may be some chapters in which you will see many similarities with respect to the original, as it is necessary for the advancement of certain specific points, but it will not happen very often, because he is trying to create new situations and not just following Arthur, because he has his own things to do the MC.
The flame collided with the water sphere, which quickly absorbed it. However, this brief moment gave us a valuable opportunity. In which Arthur had already thrown his mana-charged knife and hit that caster while falling. - Louriem_987623dReplied to hmmmmkay
I read this chapter in the Spanish version, and apparently this paragraph was mistranslated. What he was referring to was that the water attack absorbed his fire attack, as it is for the author himself it would not make sense otherwise, because you have to remember that at this time, the MC is still in black core.
The flame collided with the water sphere, which quickly absorbed it. However, this brief moment gave us a valuable opportunity. In which Arthur had already thrown his mana-charged knife and hit that caster while falling. - Louriem_987628dPosted
I can't say much, but the first few chapters don't look bad. I just hope the story doesn't fall off in the middle, or start giving away powers to the super OP protagonist at the beginning of the story. I'm really tired of Stories where characters are given the power to manipulate reality and they've only been in their new world for 2 minutes, or they're 3 or 4 years old and already the most powerful on the continent. I will be updating this, to see how the next chapters go in the next week.
- Louriem_98765mthReplied to Joseph_Hill_7805
- Louriem_98766mthReplied to Arius_Nayrb
If possible, continue naming the levels as you did now, because I have read many doupo FFs, and it is a show when translating them, because the names get confused, so I think it is much clearer in the way in which I already said it, also, many people who read the novel or saw the animation should get used to those names.
The hierarchy is divided into: Dou Zhi, Dou Zhe, Dou Master, Great Dou Master, Dou Ling, Dou King, Dou Emperor, Dou Zong, Dou Zun, Dou Sheng, and Dou Di. - Louriem_98769mthReplied to UthredofBebbanburg
from Spanish to English
Note 2: I have noticed that when translating by AI a large number of words are lost, just translating more than 200 words have been lost, which is incredible. Also, the dialogues or emotions cannot be expressed very well sometimes, and I don't know what to do with the latter. - Louriem_98769mthReplied to Ulvr_Laoch
The Rings of Power were forged around the year 1500 of the Second Age, 'Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky. Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone. Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die. One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne in the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.'
Celebrían and Arwen were equally surprised because they were well aware that very few people in this world could use "Magic," and all such individuals were known for wielding the Rings of Power. This fact put Celebrían on alert, and she became more attentive to her surroundings. - Louriem_98769mthCommented
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(Image here) - Louriem_987610mthReplied to Neongoldbrick
Plot: the protagonist always at the end.....jakjnvkjdnvkjnd
"Lastly, Ryu Wolford." - Louriem_98761yrCommented
Autor-san se ha vuelto un alcohólico jajaja
So let's celebrate, Cheers. - Louriem_98761yrCommentedCh 27 meeting Secily's parents
- Louriem_98761yrCommented
Author, who has hurt you so much?, she doesn't deserve you.....
She has taken possession of all my verses.} - Louriem_98761yrReplied to Lelouch_L23
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From now on, I will have to say goodbye to the group that accompanied me for these two lives. Farewell, my dear companions. Finally made it. I only had to die once, but we don't worry about such trifles. I will miss you, my great friends. Farewell...