Pluto28

You know, the portal concept can be used for a gate related story

Mobius

A huge disappointment for a story, nothing really happens, more like an AI generated prompt story, pacing was so disappointing, a huge waste of time to read. No development whatsoever.

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too much filler chapter, no sense at all

story is good but it takes too long for the mc to show up, the first few chapters will get you hooked but following chapters you will be more bored listening to different point of views

nah, i'd be giving up this one, too late for everything that a forced plot will take place, it took to long for his conquest and nothing was done, all the conspiracies that made him look a genius with a plan was all for naught. He did not even develop well, he did nothing at all

just asking, is the mc gonna have other romantic interest or is it just takina? i kinda want to include esdeath

it's bullshit