Its really good so far. You said you lost you train of thought. So mabey you could have Tyru say the hunt is canceled do to the concers of the wolfmen. If you dont like the idea I hope it gave some inspiration.

It is a very interestingry story. I am excited to see what happens next. And the main character seems really cool. I would defenitly recommend.

The book was really well writen. And is geting of to a good start. Had amazing twis ts and turns. I am soo excited to see what happens next.