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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u2mth
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    I'm not one to leave reviews but this story deserves it. good grammar, entertaining and fluid dialogue, good pacing and captures very well what Superman represents (translator)

    A Song of Sun and Stars [Man of Steel x ASOIAF]
    Book&Literature · OrangePanther
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u5mth
    Commented

    How well done are the personalities of the characters, although the same thing happens as in the canon, the story does not feel repetitive or boring (translator)

    Ch 38 Chapter 38 – You’re Just a Shit Teacher!
    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u6mth
    Commented

    excellent story, good pace, with fluid and entertaining conversations (translator)

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 – Raditz Begins His Sales Pitch
    Dragon Ball Alternative
    Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u6mth
    Commented

    good chapter, it's the first time I've seen a protagonist grow with Usopp, in addition to the conversations that were quite fluid (translator)

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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u10mth
    Commented

    When the protagonist uses tessaiga, does he use it in his katana form or his fang form? (translator)

    Ch 41 The Primary Quest
    DxD: The Plunder System
    Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u10mth
    Commented

    Haren

    Ch 11 Reunion
    HOTD: Tōshiro Nagi
    Anime & Comics · Eros_Lord
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u10mth
    Commented

    A piece of advice for this story or another one that you decide to write would be to give the protagonist a trait that makes him or her stand out more, it could be of any type like a paranoid personality like Batman, a prankster like Spiderman, a manipulator like Aizen, being carefree like Luffy, even Issei has a perverted personality that makes him stand out from the rest (translator)

    Ch 25 Chapter 25: School Days
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u1yr
    Posted

    muy buena historia la personalidad del mc me encanta, la interacción con los personajes es entretenida y la redacción es muy buena (traductor)

    Fate/Disturbance
    Anime & Comics · Bleap
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u1yr
    Commented

    que buena historia encerio espero que no la abandones (traductor)

    Ch 6 Kotomine Kirei
    Fate/Disturbance
    Anime & Comics · Bleap
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u1yr
    Commented

    Harem

    Ch 16 Harem or No Harem?
    Marvel x HP: Moses' Odd-venture
    Movies · 4give_NoobWriter
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u2yr
    Replied to Bukaro

    El de arriba:

    Ch 162 Capítulo 160: Mensaje de un héroe del pasado
    No Otaku con Harem System (Versión Español)
    Anime & Comics · Bukaro
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  • La_o_n_u
    La_o_n_u2yr
    Replied to Bukaro

    Uff si que hay para elegir como fate,To Aru Majutsu no Index, fairy tail, dxd, black clover, Mahouka koukou no rettousei o juegos como skyrim, the witcher etc

    Ch 155 Capítulo 153: Las mascotas son lindas
    No Otaku con Harem System (Versión Español)
    Anime & Comics · Bukaro
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