TheLastOne95

The setting of the world and how the mc comes into that place, him being one of the last players were explained well. I think the sentence structure could be better executed. Like in fast paced action, short, rapid, three worded sentences work really well. But in a scenario where the mc is waking into the new world, I think the sentences could be a bit longwinded, to show that he is confused. This gives room to slow down the pacing. Also, spaces after fullstops. Take care in looking into that. The story develops quite well in the first chapter itself. Let's see how it all pans out.

I am a gardener type of writer, and so even I don't know how the story will turn out. Sorry☺️

Thanks🥰 There are some mistakes left, and I plan to correct them after volume 1 is over. Also, there is a really dark chapter (chapter 23). If you read it till then, please let me know if it is off-putting.

Babe and baby are synonyms

It won't be the usual blue screen that gives out everything for the character.

Thank you🥰. If you find any mistakes while reading, please do tell so I can correct them.

Showing that someone cares for something that I made, what more can I ask for?

*pantser

Sorry for being vague, but I am mainly a Panther; ie, I write the story as they unfold and hence even I don't know how long each volume will be. The first volume will have one more arc, so I think it will be 130-140 chapters. If you have added the book to collection, I will put out an announcement when volume 1 is completed.

As of now, no. But don't know if there will be in the future.