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DonutLuver1yrPostedWow what a string start. I love time travel stories but it's seldom to find a good time travelling story. This starts off with such an emotional punch. The longing and the love of the couple is strong and it really hits you right in the feels. Being able to travel back in time and being able to right all the wrong of your regret is what many people often think about- the fact that MC has a chance I'm excited to see the drama and the reunion of her main love in this story!
- DonutLuver1yrCommentedCh 2 Do You Want To Rewrite Your Past?
- DonutLuver1yrCommentedCh 1 To My Sweet Pea
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to hansoraCh 4 Chapter 4 - Broken Staircase
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to hansoraCh 2 Chapter 2 - Taste of Retribution
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to hansoraCh 1 Chapter 1 - Vampire Hunter
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to hansoraRaphael surveyed the forest; the sun was breaking through the horizon and masked the thin wispy clouds and trees with a gentle orange sheen. Normally, he would expect to hear the birds greeting the brand-new day, but today, not a single sound of life made its morning call.
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to hansora
thank you so much for the kind review 😍😍😍😍😍 there is a reason why the FL did not know about the vampire queen and it shall be revealed in due course - but until then ... we shall see ~~ I'm glad you like the scene between the villagers and FL. in the face of death - people could be "selfish and cruel" BUT they never went through with hurting her 🥲
- DonutLuver1yrPosted
the first chapter was a great hook and sucks you in right away. The prose is varied and interesting so it's enjoyable to read. I love Jack as he is a relatable character. the first two chapter also balances character development and world building and the readers can anticipate a wild adventure is ahead for young Jack.
- DonutLuver1yrCommented
they did the deed 👌
Plus, he could not even tell the police about this, well because they were both underage for drinking, as well as the other certain acts they performed. - DonutLuver1yrCommented
😢😢😢😢
Scared that all of this was just a dream, or worse some sick joke created by the Frost Group to make his remaining life worse than just death. - DonutLuver1yrCommentedCh 1 Jack the Tyrant
- DonutLuver1yrCommented
the most satisfying cussy dialogue ever lol
"Instead of creating a united front against the other races from all over the universe who are trying to invade the Human lands, you guys decided to satisfying your F****** egos and kill me? F**k you and your ***** *** ******** families who have ***** **** and shove it up you ***** until it comes out of your mouth. Then ***** you mother and her ******* father who brought her into this world, only to have a ******* ****** like you. The first ***** that even considered ***** a cheap w**** which led to your very existence should have just become a eunuch. At least he would have been of help to the Human race-" - DonutLuver1yrCommented
what a POG
"We've spent nearly two hours trying to kill him, and he is still holding on after fighting with the entire United Front together!" Said another human soldier, who was joined by others as they surrounding the dying commander. - DonutLuver1yrReplied to Bunny_Junnie
- DonutLuver1yrReplied to Kara_wish_writes
thats too sad but maybe later down the road.
Smirking, Raphel's knuckles tapped Paul's shoulder. "Come on, you know I'll be fine. The faster we end this, the better." - DonutLuver1yrReplied to Tharish99