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This is an excellent story with a great premise and good execution. If there is a fault, it is the lack of editing by a native English speaker. While the story is easily deciphered in the worst cases, it could go from a good read to an excellent Book. Just my opinion. Darrin.
I know it's my book, but I just wanted to thank Ror_happy. It keeps the hopes up. To all of you out there, please give it a go. You may be pleasently surprised. Cheers Author Darrin.
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I am liking the direction that you are going. Although he should stop to mourn his mother, it's really the big flaw so far. well done.