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I couldn't find it. Has anyone found it?

Virgin

No

It's a good story. I liked it, except for the flaws I'll mention. One of them is that it doesn't mention why MC didn't form a sync bond with FMC (Alice) right away. I think that makes the story a bit unclear. Even if it doesn't explain everything, you could have given some hints. It might have been mentioned, but I didn't notice. Other than that, if you could increase the update frequency, it could be my favorite story. :)

The Harry Potter story of FMC being Bellatrix was a story I've been looking for for a long time but couldn't find. Just a little slow to update, other than that five stars

I have no doubt that you will continue this story beautifully. I am waiting for more frequent chapters for your other story (shadow slave: heir of the daemons). It is a story that I liked, I hope you continue writing. :)

If you want to remove the copy and paste feature and make a fire-only ability, I can suggest the fire ability. You can choose a fire like Toya's fire and call it corpse fire. It can gain abilities by burning the bodies of the corpses it burns (nomu, dead heroes or villains), etc. The major events in the main story can continue, but the human interactions and internal events can be more original.

Maggie greene

2

The story is beautiful, MC's character is dominant and definite. The only shortcoming in the story is the frequency of updates or the number of episodes.