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LuciMorningstar365

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2022-02-06 JoinedUnited States
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    LuciMorningstar3657 days ago
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    At this point I find the inconsistent translation of names endearing. This vampire fellow seems to get the worst of it.

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    LuciMorningstar3653 years ago
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    This novel has the makings of a classic. It fuses concepts of historical webnovels with some of those classically enjoyed by the readers here (reincarnation/transmigration, kingdom building). I have always found 19th century Europe to be one of the most fascinating and influential periods in history. Seeing how things could be from the Austrian perspective excites me as a reader. If you do too, then you'll love Justinian. BTW, as a person who enjoys solid grammar and formatting, this is a treat.

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    LuciMorningstar3653 years ago
    Posted

    This teenage dark thriller is something I had to read with the lights on. It is sufficiently creepy and I love the mysterious tone of the opening few chapters. This novellette reads like avcross between a journal entry and a movie script. 4/5 stars for me for some minor formatting and grammatical issues.

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    LuciMorningstar3653 years ago
    Posted

    This is LucifurMorningstar on his alternate author acct. Reviewing his favorite cultivation webnovel at the moment. Something in particular that I like about this novel is how Li Shen builds his crew/faction like a combination of Nick Fury and Dom Torretto. Also these characters are not simply plot devices but organically have a role on the team. + 1 powerstone!!! p.s. If you could give my new webnovel, Rebirth of the Greatest Sorcerer , a chapter or two read and drop a review, it would be much appreciated.

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    LuciMorningstar3653 years ago
    Posted

    There is a lot of good, emotional writing from the protagonists perspective. I appreciate this humble authors desire to create a sympathetic figure in the first few chaps. Also, a huge fan of the system, everything is clearly stated and neatly organized. As a native english speaker I find grammatical errors sprinkled in here as well as missing words. Since I'm not a professor of English I would recommend you read your story aloud to catch some mistakes. Editors are in short supply these days. All in all the mysterious concepts in Reincarnated as a Dragoness are worth pursuing, and wish this budding author well on their journey.