Saul_03

Get well soon my guy. May God bless you

The writing feels polished. But the character designs dawg, you can do better. Pretty much every FL feels very similar, they do not feel different. The MC kinda feels like a wimp until he feels threatened by the FL to accept her. The story kind of lost the plot in the later arcs. You are kinda rushing it in the recent arc. You can do better author. I appreciate your creativity to come up with all the concepts. The power scaling was not good at all. The scaling is too damn inconsistent. The MC emotions are also inconsistent. Many plotholes to work on. I hope you do better in your newer projects in the future. Been a good read but kind of lost charm in the end.

Dude, the narration is so edgy. OMG. The MC is a mid or high schooler in the edgelord phase. The dude is so corny that it physical hurts my soul somehow which shouldn't be possible. Overall due to AI, the novel feels well written but don't get me started on the narration and MC. It can be classified as a hate read if you are bored.

You’re not going to continue this??? Awwww man

Congrats bro!!

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