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Just want to be nice and leave a first review, even though it has only been a few chapters because I found this and have a quest to complete. The Novel is a bit fast paced and a few abilities are only briefly mentioned in the beginning. I don't know if they will be shown later on, but the development of the sci-fi part is rather slow. The concept is good and to work is continuing to be improved on. For example the talents, shown in the end of the first chapter, were not there at the start. Length of the chapters has seen a major improvement, as the wordcount jumped from an average of 800 words, to an average of >1500. Overall: It's a well written novel for a first time author and improvements are visible while reading. You can also just checking the first few chapters, which have already been updated and improved a few times.