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Jackerneitor_11yrCommentedVoldemort: "Oh ho! Then come closer as close you like." The turban flew off of Quirrel's head as Voldemort Materilized behind Quirrel like a stand. Fou similarly appears out from behind Harriet as a giant buff man-like body under his cute and tiny head.- Jackerneitor_11yrCommented
Ayo, control yourself young kro
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oh no...
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single
Do you all think I need to make it harem or single FL? - Jackerneitor_11yrCommented
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Violet Evergarden - Jackerneitor_11yrCommented
An expert of CQC... sorry, but I couldn't help myself
Meanwhile the girl, while not as fast was an extremely creative thinker, during the hand to hand combat training they went through in the past two years she managed to create many techniques to disarm and incapacitate an opponent with relatively no problems. - Jackerneitor_11yrCommented
I honestly enjoyed the chapter to me the explanation and interaction were good and makes them more fluid, compared to some stories where the characters are nothing more than "just listen to the mc or this other character" (this is just an example). As for what to do I really can't suggest much since I know nothing of honkai impact, meaning that I don't know what circumstances could the others characters from said world be in, you could do things like interaction with the fate cast, prepare for the holy grail war, you could bring some of the honkai cast to the story (like searching for them or rescue them from some other magician), make it somewhat slice of life, idk. So far I am enjoying this, so take care of yourself and keep it up.
Ch 3 What am I going to do now? - Jackerneitor_11yrCommented
Just one I would say, I really am tired of harems, like they take all these characters and make them useless or uninteresting as the next one arrives and doesn't make any difference for the mc and story, I mean what is the point of getting to like a character then kinda forget them by the time the next harem member comes. Well it's your decision anyways, good luck with your exams.
Ch 19 Notice - Jackerneitor_12yrCommented
Ruby:
"in the world of speed I am dimension above everything" I said as blood spread out of his neck as his head flew off his neck and the nevermore dropped dead on the ground - Jackerneitor_12yrCommented
Well, I loved this chapter too much, and can't wait how unique this is gonna be, everything I hope for is that there's not a harem Yuri for ruby as I really am very tired of that being in everywhere and everything here (webnovel I mean), but even if there is I'm going to still stick around :). thanks for the chapter.
Ch 57 4 - Jackerneitor_12yrCommented
Yandere*
"kill those that would stand in my way, little mouse and I will reward you" I said as I disappeared and partially reformed in the air as I watched her get up a little shake as she had a yandara smile on her face - Jackerneitor_12yrReplied to mitch2807
I think it's because it's something like a sport lockers rooms (don't know the exact name of it) where multiple people take a shower, like the ones you find in a gym, so that's why he/she takes a shower first to avoid the girls, because he/she still is a guy at heart.
So the first thing I did in the morning was wake up take a shower first because I am still a guy at heart, get dressed and go to meet with Oz and finding him was pretty easy so were the two student and teacher duo fucking and that boy wasn't hitting it right but whatever, I went to Oz and who I found on the cliff looking at the forest