I’v also been reading published works to learn how to actually write. Turns out I’m horrible at this so I’m trying to figure out how to fix this story

Got school so it’s been difficult but I’m going to try

Uploaded a new chap

😂 I’ve gotten better at writing sInce starting my other novel( Which is betTer than this btw. Check it out) Im going to re-write this one in the future cause it was really bad

In a sense but he’s more so his weapon. He’s not a slave or anything Like that. he’s the muscle

Dont worry. I didnt want to make him a chad too quick or it wouldve been boring. I have a little training arc planned and after that, His chadness Will come

Dont worry. theres going to be some elf living bedore this arc ends 😂. I just wanted him to make a name for himself before then

Ill try. im a lazy guy😂

Im so lazy 😂

HoPe you enjoy. Tried my beSt to give him Some sort of background but now the story should pick up

I probably show it A little just to show it was but i wont make it the entire scene

I Am. I decided to focus on this Novel since its better than my other

Tempor paused Until i Figure out where i want the story to go but i might Write soemthing tonight

Not his true mother and he dodes t know his father. The mothers of the tribe take Care of a lot lf the children at the same time

Also, if you think thiS novel is decent, I have another thAts a bit bEtter.

I write at night,so im usually kinda sleepy man cut me some slack.ive seen worse 😂😂

Not in a pHysical sense but mentally do to her trauma

I have another novel thats goIng to be a bit better Than This one called “the elf born under the red moon”

It depdneds, but either tonight or tomorrow night.

Thanks. I’m going to write more, I just had some school Issues