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Little_Star_34331mthCommentedMaldives is a south Asian island. How did it moved to the Mediterranean ?
The room was beautifully decorated in shades of cream and gold, with floor-to-ceiling windows overlooking the turquoise waters of the Mediterranean. But I could hardly appreciate the view, not with the panic rising in my chest.- Little_Star_34331mthCommented
English has no double past tenses .
The white neckline showing off due to the pony tail looked sexy and she stared her with a serious gaze. "Did you bought it with my credit card," she said with a hostile look on her face. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
‘Bidded’ is not the past tense of bid. Bid is an irregular verb. Past tense of bid is bid.
Lian Jiuhua decided to go out and find his confidence back. After he got up to leave, he bidded Han Moze farewell. "Your majesty, I'll be leaving to carry out your orders now. Do take care." - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Not ’fasten’, correct word is ‘hasten’.
Even after that, she still stays in the capital and spends her time a few times with them. If not because of the letter she receives today, she would just stay in the capital for a longer term and wait for the emperor permission to leave the capital. But now, she can only fasten them and retrieve the permission quicker. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
清梦 qingmeng = sweet dreams or sleep.
"How dare you disturb my Qingmeng!" - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
* make a lot of money. Cost = expense
Seeing that the group was busy fighting each other, he took the chance to discreetly go away from the fighting scene and follow Eli's scent. No matter what happens, they must send the girl to that client, because she will definitely cost a lot of money! - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Clairvoyance is an ability or power in a person to perceive matters beyond the range of a ordinary person. It is not as a lot of the Chinese -English dictionary translation of 千里眼 (dated/ old) The mordern 千里眼 is 望眼镜 / telescope: an instrument to look further than your eyes can see. Col is in the Chinese-English dictionary translation for 山凹/山坳。 This word is not common in English, it is used as a meteorogical / geological term. The more common word is valley. Nice story.
Ch 9 Prince! - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
* on the lam .
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Don’t understand what the author wants to convey.
It was Helian Mei, she was cutting from while eyeing Helian Wei Wei, her gaze was bright with disdain. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Dalliance is a noun nog a verb. The verb is dally. Thus * dallied. Instead of using such bombastic word use the more common word : toy. She toyed with me.
"Rescue?" The man stretched out his last word, the coldness in the man's eyes hit straight at Shadow "Are you reminding this Lord about the fact a girl dallianced me?" - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
A correspondent is one who has regular commercial relations with another. this person would not be involved in Michael’s internal affairs. Michael would have handed his gun to his assistant or underboss.
After handing his gun to his correspondent, he started to walk out of the room. Just before leaving, a man whispered over Michael's handing a file to him. No one knew what the man said to Michael, his mood significantly improved. He even had a sly smile playing on his reply, which was completely opposite from his cold and ruthless personality. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Emperor is a title of a sovereign or male monarch. Empire is the territory.
Michael was the first person to get control of an underworld who were ruled by a generation of families. What he was today was by himself, no one could make it up the food chain like Michael which naturally meant his life was constantly under the eyes of scrutiny and jealousy. One mistake from him means his whole emperor shatters into pieces. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Surpass means better, outdo, excel. Bullet cannot surpass through the head. Bullet bored through the head. Bore as in past tense of boring a tunnel.
The bullet surpassed through his head, blood tainting the walls. While the body lay on the ground motionless. Once he was sure the man was no more, he waved at the people to clean up the mess. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Rugged is an adjective not a verb. The correct word is dug, past tense of dig.
Sara rugged her nails onto her palm, and calmed herself or at least acted like she was fine in front of her. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Correct translation may be : sour spicy shredded vegetable pickle (Chinese) or shredded cabbage kimchi (Korean). Different taste, choose your favorite.😉
The quails were stewed together with potatoes and vegetables, and there was also a bowl of egg soup, a stack of pickled sour and spicy vegetable hair, and a bowl of meat. Everything looked delicious. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Light does not fall, light shines.
Yan Xi immediately smiled. Her eyes were curved like crescents, and when the light fell in, she looked extremely beautiful. - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
Bloodline means ancestry or pedigree. How is she going to circulate the bloodline? The correct word is blood.
"Why are you talking about this too?!" She corrected herself. "I know a lot of things. I've been learning massage and acupuncture for many years. They can't treat your illnesses, but they can at least relieve some pain and promote the circulation of your bloodline." - Little_Star_34331yrCommented
The word ‘ricochet’ is only used with objects bouncing over surfaces or glancing rebound. Glancing here does not mean looking but sliding and bouncing movement of objects. So I read this as the policemen chest bump each other repeatedly. I don’t think this is what the writer means. 😉
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The better translation for 算账 is not ‘calculate’ . The better word is ‘reckon.’.
"Ah. I almost forgot that I hadn't calculated this issue with you." Before Qin Youjiao finished speaking, Pei Yunge suddenly interrupted her.