Noaaman_Mostafa

Idk why he's explaining his inner monologue to us ? we know , tbh i skip these paragraphs cause i really don't need extra info that does not add up something new ... His change does not add up to the way he acts idk but thats how i feel sometimes

sometimes you just waste too much space with the same sentences or a whole paragraph with just the same meaning ... i hate when that happens but overall i like the story , the redundancy thooo xxxxxxxxxxxxx

i love the story i really do , writing the usage of the spirit stone mine as a narrative , then mention it again in the conversation and by the two elders , like why ? 😂 ( it just felt super redundant even for a filler for words) thanks for the chapter as always