AidenDamart

I think I am in love with the protagonist. Everything about this novel is flawless except for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. I hope you will improve it in the future. Good job 😀

I like long chapters although they are a pain to write for the authors. Thanks, you increased my vocabulary. Enjoying it so far

Found many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors but they do not disturb my experience.

Thank you for your kind words ☺ I will work harder to make it even better keep supporting

the narration is done from the protagonist POV

I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting 😀 I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺

Description About how the power works are very complex. But accept that this novel has a good first impression.😀

I will keep that in mind in

yes

The system can not control his whole body at once