A great idea..but sadly this fanfic is just not readable, it's even worst than the other mtl translations........................................................................................................................

I think you forgot something not only tsokuyomi is able to affect s class ninjas...there are the likes of ,kotoamatsukami(the greatest genjutsu to ever exist,you can just look at someone 'like- literally anyone' and boom you can change his/her will and memories permanently), sharingan genjutsu(that has to do with ocular power of the sharingan....obito was able to control the nine tails and also the jinchuriki of isobu 'mizukage' with the genjutsu of his mangekyou and man nine tails and a perfect jinchuriki is no joke.) the ketsuryugan genjutsu is no joke either it's ocular power is comparable to the tree great dojutsu

morrreeeeeee

Oops, it seems that I won't be able to upload this month ( i did a Portugues exam today..)cause I have a math exam soon and I literally didn't study anything, well we are going to finish school so I'll have plenty of time to write so yeah~ have a nice day!

First time ever i read a fanfic where the mc reincarnates to a world of cultivation with naruto powers. I find it quite new, well at least for me cause this is the first time i ever read one of these. maybe there are billions out there and it's just me that didn't find them- Anyways I was really desapointed by the story development. the first few chapters were OK, but then.....idk what happened...the story became forced and the author started bullshi*****.........and yeah Final evaluation:1.4(- 3stars for the world background,although it's cliché, it was good.....i guess? Anyways I like the cultivation worlds so....... - well, 1star for everything else)

Ikr, that's why i like using pc more...

well ur sense of humor is...........terrible.

well, I hate romance too cause, I read a lot of novels/fanfics with romance where the FL falls for the mc cause he saved her? well, most of the ppl will say: of course, she'll be grateful for him for doing that. me: and that's my point! GRATEFUL. I find these types of romantic relations really cringy. (FOR ME) also, there are a lot of novels/fanfics where romance starts early, well too early- (like- I saw a lot of them, where mc starts a relationship at the age of 3~4? WTH?) well, not all of the romance fanfictions/novels are bad I still liked a few of them. well, I read fanfictions, manhwas and mangas the most so I don't really know many novels.....

well, bro, it's just that I don't like it even if it's not reality, well I read some harem novels too, and most of them were sh** that's why I hate it and avoid reading it most of the time, I'm not saying that they're all terrible there are ones like: magic emperor(one of my fav manhwas so far), ATG (although I don't like ATG mc the story was still good) that are pretty good. well everybody has a different taste and different opinions and that's what differs us. I just replied to your comment cause u said why does a lot of ppl hate harem "for no apparent reason" and that's it-

I literally wrote this to someone as a reply but whatever....... in the harem sh** -every chapter contains a new girl -the author doesn't even give the shit abt the story development -and also it's not "true love" just pleasure shit. there are a lot of harem novels/fanfics (here in webnovel) that I couldn't even find a single novel or a fanfic without it and that makes me hate it even more. -and ofc there are other reasons that I have yet to mention why I hate harem: -if the girl truly loves the mc she wouldn't want any other girl beside him and if the mc really loves the girl why would he even think of another one? -mc doesn't give the shit abt how the girl feels when he is with another one -mc sometimes abandons "a girl" and forgets abt her( well just what happened in ATG I'm not saying it's a bad novel/manhwa it's just that the mc is a piece of-....) -and sometimes, well a lot of times- the mc steals others' wives, wut the heck? just give me a reason to like a garbage like that? *well guys this is my opinion*

cause it's shit, like- in the harem shit every chapter will contain a new girl they don't even give the shit abt the story development and also bc it's not "true love" just pleasure shit. there is a lot of it(here in webnovel) that i couldn't even find a novel or a fanfic without it and that makes me hate it even more (well I also hate romance but not as much as harems) and ofc there are other reasons that I have yet to mention -if the girl truly loves the mc she wouldn't want any other girl beside him and if the mc really loves the girl why would he even think of another one? -mc doesn't give the shit abt how the girl feels when he is with another one -mc sometimes abandons "a girl" and forgets abt her( well just what happened in ATG I'm not saying it's a bad novel/manhwa it's just that the mc is a piece of-....) -and sometimes, well a lot of times- the mc steals others wives, wut the heck? and you want me to like a garbage like that???'

he has a freaking- well, he has a system? why doesn't he use it, like- he literally can buy everything from there. I think there is something with the mc's brain- like- he is so stupid- and no not the funny type.

does anyone know a story where the mc is a shop/restaurant owner or something?? I really want to read these types of fanfics... I didn't read this fanfic (cause it's dropped )but I liked its idea...

...............do you even know wut does it mean???

I expected something good from this but....it seems that I was wrong........ I read the first chapter and liked it so much although there were a lot of grammar mistakes it was still understandable.........but after a few chapters it became...............how could I say it........cringy, stupid, forced, and blah blah blah~ advice from me.....don't read this fanfic or you'll get so disappointed with its development.........

oops, I forgot to talk abt the story development and this stuff...well what can I do?? t's just that Cale is too charming for me to think about anything else! Uhm, well the story development is more than amazing, grammar: amazing, world background: amazing, well, all in all .......it's just amazing- if you don't like harem and romance this is for you! if you like them, it's for you too! well- anyways there is no romance in this novel which is rare to see, well at least for me cause every time I write something in search...all that appears are harem and romance novels/fanfictions and all this- stuff ... you know...

the mc of this novel is one of my fav characters !!!!!! he is cool, handsome, smart, selfish! dammmnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! aaayaaaaaaaaaaaaa the mc of this novel is one of my fav characters !!!!!! he is cool, handsome, smart, selfish! dammmnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! aaayaaaaaaaaaaaaa

well, I didn't finish reading it.......... but I couldn't stop myself from writing a review.....

BL???' huh? but the mc is a female what the heck are you talking about???

ddddddammmmmmnnnn so good!!!!!!!!! I even read the manhwa it's just ....amazing.I hate romance, but I couldn't have myself hate this masterpiece it's just too amazing - I really liked it! it's literally top-notch in all aspects! what 5 star?? it deserves way more!