it was perfect down to the last little details

it's now rewrited http://wbnv.in/a/a6hMsqB

Daichi didn't drive a Pontiac GTO but he drives a 1999 Mitsubishi GTO

ok it's already fixed

there is a bug and my draft is a chaos

ok I already fixed all the chapters and if you found any problems just reply and I will fix it immediately

this is a masterpiece

ok I fixed and extended a few of the chapters if you found any problems just reply to this

well im planning to make a anime series of it. me and my friends are actually still working on the characters

for the first few its bad but after around chp 15 it have some improvements and also im in the process of improving chp 1-5

ok

as a race car enthusiasts and a beginner my self this story is interesting and your writing skill is good actually i love to see what will you come up next