Onso

+1

It’s good . … . Ok bye LET ME POST THIS SHIT

It’s very well written and I enjoy the multiverse traveling aspect .

Not gonna lie all of your stuff so far has been banger, please keep writing but don’t burn yourself out.

Please continue this, there aren’t any good campione stories. K I

Kuzan

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. K

+1

Giving it a five, could use some improvements in the writing, but still miles better than most fanfics on here, hope you keep going……………………….. (need the review to be 14 characters)zzhdhdbsudbbdbdbdbdbhdhdbdbbdbfbhdhr

If Eidolon wants to get stronger it’s possible for him to go to the campions world and attempt to kill a god right? I don’t know if you would consider that world mid teir or not but it could be a good idea to make him a god in an easy-ish way.